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by CJMay

person Netjaymz
schedule January 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent job on the threesome.. I like the way you grew the relationship over the years w/o over taxing the piece it was a strong heart felt PWP.. I liked it !!!!!! and the Sex was just HOT HOT HOT... of course how can you not love the three of them togthere Excellent job.

I would have someone look it over or possible let it sit and you do it but there are several typos and missed tenses. But over all well done

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