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December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good work...but go easy on the exclamation marks, dude. Makes a reader all jumpy n\' stuff. ;)
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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is wkd!! Rite sum more chapters plz!!!!!!!!!!!
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April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is quite good, but I just thought I should tell you that in the Harry Potter series, they use a different way of marking, not A\'s, B\'s and C\'s, but (in order from highest to lowest) O for outstanding, E for Exceeds Expectations, A for Acceptable, P for Poor and D for Dreadful. There\'s also T for Troll, but I\'m not sure if it\'s real or not.
And one more thing, you tend to over use the exclamation points. It seems every second or third sentence has ! after it, and it just doesn\'t need it.
But other than that, it\'s good! And please update soon!
And one more thing, you tend to over use the exclamation points. It seems every second or third sentence has ! after it, and it just doesn\'t need it.
But other than that, it\'s good! And please update soon!
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April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^o^ AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! EMAIL ME WITH UPDATE!!! ^.^ This is getting good!