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November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Great start! I just read your first chapter. :) and I'm liking what i'm reaging so far! I'm off to the next one! Again, great job!!! ^_^
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May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, this was rather short...but still! I very highly recommend you UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!! Please!!! :( this seems to be going somewhere favorable! please post another chapter soon!! :D
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September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
exellent up to now keep up the good work
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March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Simple and clear to the point: It was quite a catch to my eyes. Despite the shortness that AFF.net allows us to use for a summary, I was amused by it. Even more so when I read the entire thing.
Sadly you have only written to the second chapter, but do I encourage you to continue your works. There is more I can expect from your works as well as yourself. I know I will not be disappointed. Please update soon, I will be awaitng and from that I will reward you with a well deserved review. Farethewell, till then to the third chapter. *nods*
Sadly you have only written to the second chapter, but do I encourage you to continue your works. There is more I can expect from your works as well as yourself. I know I will not be disappointed. Please update soon, I will be awaitng and from that I will reward you with a well deserved review. Farethewell, till then to the third chapter. *nods*
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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Kathline
You have a good plot to the story.I hope you;ll right moreealleally enjoy the story.
You have a good plot to the story.I hope you;ll right moreealleally enjoy the story.
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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Kathline
You have a good plot to the story.I hope you;ll right more I really enjoy the story.
You have a good plot to the story.I hope you;ll right more I really enjoy the story.
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May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great start! I hope you update soon.
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May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oo! u must keep goin! its very VERY good so far and i cant wait to see the next chappie! buh bye!
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April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It\'s good...so they\'ll fall in love, right? RIGHT?!? RIGHT??!?!!?!?!?!?!?!?!? O_o