rate_review Reviews

loved it
hope you update real soon

I\'m sorry to say, but the first chapter in the begining...well it was like I was reading a kid\'s story. I mean you can become a really good writer, but be more descriptive. And don\'t use said all the time and their names all the time, you know what I\'m saying. But other then that, I think the storyline might be really interesting. Oh, and I\'m sorry to be alittle mean with my review, but people usually bring me their things so I can review them. I\'m honest and I actually tell them what they need or should pull out, and I\'m a fantastic writer, all my English teachers say so. And I\'m sorry if I\'m too harsh. But again, I\'m being honest with you.
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This is pretty good! Please update soon! The story is really interesting! ^_^

pleasssseeee go on ast ast as possible, oh, and please write longer chapters!!