rate_review Reviews

thanks for the update. Now I want some chocolate cake *sigh*

thanks for the update. Very interesting

I love this story. I can\'t wait to see her interaction with Snape.

thanks for the update.

Cliffhangers?? Gaah!

Translation: I\'m very much enjoying your work and I do so look forward to the next chapter. It\'s refreshing to see a view of the characters future that is slightly more mundane, yet still in character. In many ways I can see Hermione putting in time at the grunt level, if you will, and once she begins to understand what healthy boundaries look like for her, naturally succeeding. Similarly, I can see Harry bewailing the theoretical end of Auror training. He\'s a praxis kind of guy, this we know. And Ron... I\'m not sure I completely agree with your characterization of Ron, but I think that\'s mostly emotion on my part. I don\'t *want* to agree with it, which is, I think, a far different thing than not actually being convinced that it could happen, which I think I am in this case.

I\'m very interested to see how Snape will play into this, though I imagine that will be forthcoming in the next chapter or two. I\'m wondering if the Dark Potions thing at Hogwarts was a play on the Order\'s part to reassure Voldemort of Sev\'s loyalty, or something on Voldemort\'s part to either test loyalty or try to condemn Sev in the Order\'s eyes. Or option X, of course.

Nonetheless, I\'m breathless with ancitipation. May yousesuses be with you.

Sare

Hi! Just wanted to let you know that I love how you have started so far. I just read the first four chapters and I definitely can\'t wait for more. It\'s nice to see some interesting original characters in the background. You write well and it flows nicely and I can\'t wait to see more of our dear potions master. You\'ve got a nice little cliffhanger there and I look forward to where you are going to take it.

Cheers! Keep writing and most of all, have fun!!!

Thursdayschild

Aaarrrrggh...don\'t leave us hanging there! Too much suspense! Post an update quickly!

I reread the whole thing today and I\'m still greatly pleased with your efforts. It\'s original and very well done. I did find the spot where the \'our\' should go instead of the \'are\' if you\'re intted.ted. In the first chapter - \"More than once, Hermione wondered to herself, Is this where are lives are heading?\" The first are after where is the one that should be replaced with our. Keep up the good work.

Ykes! Oh no this can\'t be good. thanks.

Wow.
This is really good. I had my doubts before actually reading it, but wow!
Don\'t ever stop writing!