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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ouh ouh.. Don\'t stop here, what ever you do, don\'t stop writing, I desperately want to read more. Do update soon. Good story so far.
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting.
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, that was really good. I enjoy the plot. I love stories that start at the dursleys and then bring harry to the wizarding world broken. Keep writing, i will be checking lol. Ttfn. Kd
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May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great start, please update.
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April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hmm, that was okay, but there is alot more you could do with what you\'ve got, and what\'s with all the question marks? maits its just my computer, but whenever someone talks its like this: ?Sorry aunt Petunia.?? why??? lol anywasy mabey its just my comptuer, that was okay but try to write in more depth next time and you need smoother transitions too
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April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story has a good start, but the formatting is messed up. Thare are ?s instead of \' s which is making it difficult to read.