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April 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
please continue! I luv it!
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October 20, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Wowzer- Through a glass darkly indeed. I like the build of dialogue and the description of a relatioship subtly building into something more. The scene of the assasination had a sickening, virtual feel to it- i gues that i am sensitive, now. And the last line- You are now the Dark Lord- was a kicker. When ever you post the other part , I will look forward to your twisted looking glass view.
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October 18, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, this is cool. I adored this fic on ff.n and now you promise more!
The points I liked most: a very interesting take on chan. Sort of... I don\'t know, Graeco-Roman? Probably Spartan.
Liked Severus\' characterisation. Lupin was great, and the idea of ownership and all... The whole story of James&Lily, Marauders\' youth and all, although you hint at some aspects, does not really seem to fit into this story. Don\'t ask why, it\'s just a subjective feeling. But then, you don\'t dwell on it much, so it doesn\'t matter.
It was very, very interesting to see how powerful Harry actually is and how this power is expressed. In the books (Book 4) the power was there, clearly, although Harry didn\'t know how/didn\'t dare to use it. Your Harry does. 500 points to his house.
-Red
The points I liked most: a very interesting take on chan. Sort of... I don\'t know, Graeco-Roman? Probably Spartan.
Liked Severus\' characterisation. Lupin was great, and the idea of ownership and all... The whole story of James&Lily, Marauders\' youth and all, although you hint at some aspects, does not really seem to fit into this story. Don\'t ask why, it\'s just a subjective feeling. But then, you don\'t dwell on it much, so it doesn\'t matter.
It was very, very interesting to see how powerful Harry actually is and how this power is expressed. In the books (Book 4) the power was there, clearly, although Harry didn\'t know how/didn\'t dare to use it. Your Harry does. 500 points to his house.
-Red
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October 17, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
I\'d already read till chapter twelve on fandominaton.net, but I didn\'t know how to review there, so I do it here. Please continue to write and post this story. It\'s very interesting and I wouldn\'t want it to just end there, with Harry beeing the next dark Lod. I meaats ats his reaction? And Snapes and his friends for that matter? And what will he do?
Er ... yeah thats it so far. Please more?
I\'d already read till chapter twelve on fandominaton.net, but I didn\'t know how to review there, so I do it here. Please continue to write and post this story. It\'s very interesting and I wouldn\'t want it to just end there, with Harry beeing the next dark Lod. I meaats ats his reaction? And Snapes and his friends for that matter? And what will he do?
Er ... yeah thats it so far. Please more?