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for Love's Labours; Paradise Lost

by Veresna

person Andrea
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!! I cried to death.. seriously i only cried so much with The Stand (S. King\'s) and the death of Sirius Black (well ok i must confess i cry for almost every little sad story, but those made cry as if the end of the world had arrived)... so it means that i loved your story!!!!!!!! i\'d also like to know if you don\'t write any novel of your own creation??????????? \'cause you should... ;)
GREAT STORY...
Have a nice life...!!!
person Andrea
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh well damnit, ok not every little sad story moves me to tears, but any really good one does!!!!
person C
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. You never fail to amaze...
person Rainbow
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a really horrible ending. I\'m crying now. But it was the only realistic way to finish it off. I loved the whole story. Well done.
person christine ivans
schedule November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was, quite honestly, bloody fucking brilliant.
person Roget
schedule September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How can you do it? You've written a story that took me to depths, then heights, then wrung more out of me than I thought I could feel. At this point, I actually hurt inside, in my heart and my throat and behind my eyes.

The portrait of Snape that you created is so full and complete that I don't know how I can ever see him any other way, and I don't know when I will be able to read another story about him. But I shall, soon enough, because of authors like you who keep rediscovering the complexities of his mind and soul. hankhank you - words that are inadequate for my gratitude. I can only hope that you continue writing, and posting, and whenever you do sell that first novel (if you haven't already), that I find it and read it.

RR
person Estrilda
schedule August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oops. I went to your website and found a link back to SH. Now I feel really silly. I also intend to spend muche tie time in the library reading your terrific work. It just screamed to me that it needed to be at the site. I am soo glad it is. Also, I looked up through your reviews and I couldn't believe that someone had the audacity to howler you in all caps about not having a sappy, happy ending. I think it turned out perfectly. Thank you so much for a lovely reading experience.
person Estrilda
schedule August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have meandered through this wonderful story at a luxurious pace over the past three days. It is simply delightful. I do not know if you post anywhere but here at aff, but I would like to invite you to come to a website called sycophanthex.com and post this wonderful story on their Severus Snape site called Occlumency. s a s a moderated website and only three chapter can be loaded at a time by submitting them to the queue, but the website is really very user friendly and has a large group of loyal readers who are pretty good about posting reviews. Your story, I think, is so well written and emotionally wrenching, it is best taken in small exquisite doses, perhaps like those Severus would offer if in a good mood. If you are interested and would like to go straight to the site or would like to contact me directly, please feel free to do so. I love this story. Estrilda
person Gillian
schedule August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story was so touching. I was in tears at the end sobbing my little heart out. I want to thank you for writing such a moving piece.
person Melanie
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bravo! I love the Shakespearean touch as I can hear Snape speak your prose with Rickman\'s incredible voice. So glad that you stayed true to canon with regard to him. I prefer OC as Hermoine/Snape shippers leave me cold. I think this is far and away the BEST you\'ve written( BTW- no one can touch your versions of Snape)! I\'m rereading it now. _Melanie
P.S. Thanks to you for that very hot Snape(Rickman voiced) dream I had last night!! \"More please\".

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