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August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool story - update soon!
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July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH please oh please update now LOL! I think it\'s perfect and I can\'t wait to see what went wrong and how he\'s gonna fix it.
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May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hope there will be more photos involved as the story progresses. I like wizarding photos and seeing what people do at the time. It\'s amazing what a magical camera can pick up. Nice fic, please continue :-)
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April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like it - it was soon clear who was who and there are not enough erroro to get really ditracted. So don\'t worry write on! But a Beta is always a great thing not only to catch things you have missed also to help you getting over the plot - she / he can tell you how it looks from the readers point of view without having the whole story in theri heads ;-)
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April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the longer chapter. I\'m getting a better feel for your story and I can tell its going to be quite angsty, but as long as there is a happy ending I can stick with it.
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April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like the story, but I think you might want to consider a beta-reader, since there are quite a few grammatical errors. Don\'t let something small like that interrupt the flow of your story. :c)
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April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It looks like a really interesting premise. A few notes, though. It would benefit you if you could make the chapters a little longer (or update, like, every friggin hour.) You could also do to have a beta-reader... sometimes, they catch vagueness as well as spelling/grammar errors. If you need one, I\'d be happy to offer. I look forward to seeing where this goes!
Still Ill,
TheGreyLady
Still Ill,
TheGreyLady
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April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh I like the start of this . More soon please.