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for Time in a Bottle

by teshara

person MadAboutHarry
schedule April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting start. Obviously, it was a time turner, but who could it be? I\'ll have to think on this. You gave some hints, but not much to go on. Good show!
person Krystine
schedule April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
For being the first chapter of a fic, its a little above mediocre. (Basically around a 6.5/7 out of 10) although I can see this piece evolving into a good fic.

Yet its very good so far, keep going and I\'me ite it\'ll catch more of my interest.

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