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for Shattered Glass

by Eadon

person redrose
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Snape is such a hornball. I like how Draco just started groping Harry in the middle of class. Real good, as is your attempt at a sex scene. Better than mine. My best is \"Pink satin\" and I don\'t know.... The offer to beta is real, just sendme an e-mail if you want me to beta your fic. Keep writing, I enjoyed it.
person alysha
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey!

yay more!!! lol

Alysha
person theoddguy
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story.I personaly liked the sex scene.I thought it was nice for their first time.The kisses where hot.;) I cant wait to find out who or what sent that dream to Harry.And what the true meaning of tatoo is for?


Great story so far,and I cant wait for new chapters.:)
person Relena
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your writting is amazing, i can acctually SEE in my mind Harry and Draco as your words are processed. In msot storys its two faceless guys, i just can\'t keep then harry and draco, yours is good!

Keep it up pleasE?
person shelleykids
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please have more soon I would like to see more of this bad Harry lol
person redrose
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Harry\'s the half-blood. Hermione\'s the disgusting mudblood. I liked this fic because I adore Dark!Harry *licks lips* have fun with it and I must continue reading!
person Anon
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it. The whole evil Harry thing. But can there please please be a happy ending? Even if it\'s an evil ending, make it happy? Save my sanity lol. And yeah, a li bit bit of roughness in the sex can be so hot ^_^
person Padfoot the Marauder
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHOA! My eyes just bugged out of my skull with that kiss! Whiew! *Pant! Pant!*

Can\'t wait to see where this is going.
person redrose
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, hun, here\'s a tissue *hangs her a pair of Draco\'s black silk boxers* now just feel happy and update soon. If you need help or ideas always feel free to e-mail me. If you need a beta, the same applies. I love this fic but I see one tiny, itty, bitty thing: Snape is supposed to be a spy so why would Harry tell him about wanting to be a Dark Wizard. Unless it\'s a cover. I liked the bit about where Harry bled \'cause Draco bit him hard. I usually don\'t go for those things *looks at fic Dark bonds* nope - lol. Keep it up!

Much love with a big shaggin, boy lovin\', smut writing, hug!

Rose Eva
person Caffine High
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is quite interesting and well written please continue very soon.

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