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for Animalistic Instincts

by Sboesche

person constructive criticism *gg*
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m not keen on the plot of your story, sorry about that
(but really, i mean who\'s interested in two dogs fucking?),but i only read chapter one,
so maybe sometime they have human form...(while they\'re at it)
But i must assure you, that your writing style is very good!
I\'d like to read some story from you with a less....strange plot
Best wishes
one of your reviewers(*fg*)
person you stupid bitch
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not only the writing lack grace, you can\'t spell Hogwarts. It\'s HOGWARTS. Get a beta or better still a life. This story SUCKS in a bad way.
person PharaohsBeloved
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY! MORE MORE MORE! please? pretty please? pretty please with sugar and naked chocolate covered Draco on top?
person Pyrefly
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woah... Wow... disturbing... but yet witty. Never, never have I ever read a story like this. But it\'s good, but like I said disturbing. Very interesting though... and very different. Different in a good way, I\'ve been reading to many fluffy, \'Ooh I love you Draco!\' ficcets lately *roles eyes* they get all my nerves but I can\'t really find anything that\'s dark... been searching for something different, and I definately found it. Good job.
~Pyrefly
person ningchan
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you scare me
person zed
schedule May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*ROTFLMAO* I like your outtake on my bitch!Draco piece. It\'s definitely more graphic than mine and yup, kudos for the perverseness. I might cont fro from the original fic, but it will take a drentrent twist, so no worries there. I am a Harry/Draco shipper -- done the Harry loves Draco, and now I want to explore the Harry *hates* Draco because love and hate are different sides to the same coin, yanno?

I\'m waiting Ch2 Ch2...bring it on!

person PharaohsBeloved
schedule May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked it!....even if it is sick and twisted....WRITE MORE!

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