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for More then Magic

by darkvixen

person Rachel Dracon
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Finally a good Master/pet story, and this is a hot pairing from Harry Potter! Good job; looking forward to future updates! ^.^
person diluvina
schedule November 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked it a lot, but... It's been a long time since you last updated. Do you intend to keep it going on, or will you leave this fiction like it is?

I hope you will writte more chapters.
person Evilthing
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Isn\'t it Lucius? Well...good job
person Dez
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD U KICK ASS!! this would have to be the best fan fic i had to of read in a very long time thank u!!! your so good at writing!!!! it was a very good read!!! you are awsome keep up the good work!! ^_^
person aaf
schedule June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice, there\'s more to come, lol, yay! Hehe Sirius is a naughty boy...
person Siriusisahottie
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg i loved that! forget what that looser said about you glossing over all that stuff! it was great he just doesn\'t know a good story when he sees one! well i\'m sure i\'ll be reading more of this, hope you continue soon!
person EmTi
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
:Drewls: Omigod. I could ;die;. I love how you write this story... The descriptions are so wonderful. Yay! Keep up the good work!!! YAY FOR REMI ON THE BOTTUM AND SIRI ON THE TOP! ><\'.. my favourite..
person SweetMisery
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this chapter but watch, you had Sirius say \'oh gods\', you\'re going into ygo but i like this chapter
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That has to be one of the strangest combinations I\'ve read in a chapter O_o For me, I don\'t know how other people think reading this (and I\'m going to look at your other reviews in a minute), the beginning was very heavily fluffy and that\'s not my thing really. BUT I\'m glad I persevered with it, I thought it got better towards the end of the chapter. I must admit I found the BDSM between Sirius and Remus a *little* out of place, I didn\'t feel like I understood it properly. -shrugs- Overall I thought it made an interesting story, but for me you glossed ovits its I wanted to know more about.
person sweetmisery
schedule May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmmmmmmmmm lemony goodness, although i don\'t read this category enough, i love this story

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