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June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohh...an update. Yay =)
I liked this chapter because of the length and the quality.
You\'re doing a great job!
//Min...
I liked this chapter because of the length and the quality.
You\'re doing a great job!
//Min...
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May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 1-5... I just finished reading what you have so far & will be looking forward to your next update & Hermione\'s date with Draco!!! I am quite curious to see just how much Albus knows of her true past as well as seeing how her training with Severus goes!!! The tension between Severus & Hermione is so thick, am wondering if he will have a change of attitude toward her now that the Malfoy\'s are entering the mix?!?
The only thing that I could say in cc is that you do have some spelling errors, but I do very much like your story!!! Til chapter 6, Deb >^..^<
The only thing that I could say in cc is that you do have some spelling errors, but I do very much like your story!!! Til chapter 6, Deb >^..^<
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May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey Alicat,
I like the premise of your fic. It has the potential of being a really good fic.
Just one thing though... you need a beta. A beta would polish your story and check your grammar. It would make it a much smoother story to read.
Consider it.
Cheers.
I like the premise of your fic. It has the potential of being a really good fic.
Just one thing though... you need a beta. A beta would polish your story and check your grammar. It would make it a much smoother story to read.
Consider it.
Cheers.
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May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Of course you know I love the story and want to read more!!
I like how you keep the characters especially Snape how JK would want them.
I like how you keep the characters especially Snape how JK would want them.
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May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello again!! I\'m glad to see that Albus thought it was a good idea to explain things to Hermione. If she gets too confused this early, she tends to be a bit annoying in fics. And the other review where I said \'And the clong line\' I was just making a funny because everyone always puts something to the effect of \'I can\'t wait for the next update\'. Sorry for confusing you. :)
ArienAstera
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May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That word up there is supposed to be \'closing\', not \'clong, lol. Sorry, I just looked at it. :D
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May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was a nice chapter, though a bit eventless.
I liked your description of Mages and I\'m looking forward to see what happened with Hermione and Severus.
I\'m sorry for the shor review, but I\'ve got classes now.
//Min...
I liked your description of Mages and I\'m looking forward to see what happened with Hermione and Severus.
I\'m sorry for the shor review, but I\'ve got classes now.
//Min...
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May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is really good, I cant wto sto see anew chapter. Keep up the good work!!!
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May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like your story so far. Please update soon!!
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May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it, and can\'t wait to find out how Hermione and Snape evade the Malfoys! Keep that fire going!!