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schedule
May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This looks promising. But you need to punctuate and spell check. Try getting a beta, and keep writing!
schedule
May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
its an ok story but u need to proof read or get a beta.
schedule
May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
grammar and spellcheck are on your computer for a reason. Commas are a good thing. Re-post this when you\'ve proofread it!