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May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good work. The interior monologue in particular is very well-handled. You characterize Snape well in just a few sentences. I\'m a bit miffed that you haven\'t gotten more reviews. What\'s wrong with people?
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May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve been following your story since the beginning, and I must say that you are doing a great job. I\'m not usually a noir fan, but this is definitely very good. Very reminiscent of a Sam Spade novel. :) Keep up the good !
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May 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh, what happens next? Thanks for the update.
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May 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. As always, looking forward to your next update.
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May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You\'ve successfully established the \'noir\' atmosphere right from the get-go, right down to thek, bk, bottle of booze, and cigarettes! Looking forward to more.
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May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A mys and and a good one at that. Until your next update, thanks a bunch.
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May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m entranced. \'Till next chapter then...
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May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think you have hit the noir genre on the head. Nice set up for the story.
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May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter. I\'ve already keyed in on some suspicious aspects of Hermione\'s story. Also, don\'t forget to upload a link to this story in the Noir Challenge Folder at WIKTT.
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May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I adore mysteries. I am eagerly awaiting your next installment. The beginning was really good...I liked the flow and the descriptions.