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June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! That was awesome! Go you!
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interesting twist to the common responces to this challenge. i greatly enjoyed your veiw on it, and wish it were longer. i would of greatly enjoyed to see how their marriage worked out, but I also like ow it leaves off with the possiblity for the reader to think up whats happens. If you ever decided to continue it, i shall luff you, howver Im not sure if ti really needs more. Anyways, very nice job with this story!
~Miss Melody Ann Rivers
~Miss Melody Ann Rivers
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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story. A couple of typos but the frustration and sorrow spoke to me and made me want to cry to see these people who both hurt unaware of the others pain. I might suggest checking in on them to see how they are doing.
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January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOO......don\'t end there! Please... do write more. Please. I\'m enjoying this. I wish that we could see them over time come to love and trust one another fully, maybe even have kids...etc.
Please consider it.
~Starwolf~
Please consider it.
~Starwolf~
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June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m just balling my eyes out, this was probably a more realistic take on the Marriage Challenge. I aplaud you. I hope you consider a epilogue or maybe a sequel? Thanks for writing, very well done.
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June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
If you write more, please include your OC Wea Weathergold. She\'s so much fun -- a cross between Mother Earth and Elle Woods!
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June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
If you write more, please include your OC Fern Weathergold. She\'s so much fun -- a cross between Mother Earth and Elle Woods!
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June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I love it! The wording... the descriptions.... just... wow.. I think I\'ll read it again... and again... and again. :D This story is so awesome. Thanks for posting it so that others might read it!
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May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow.