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Excellent exploration of what such a law might be like -- and I particularly appreciated that you set in relief just how extreme such a measure would be, and how extreme the society that actually enforced it would become. (Particularly liked the bit about not even Voldemort being able to condone it.) A brilliant, fluffless take-off on the \'Marriage Law\' that\'s fuelled so much fluffy emptiness as well as so many good and interesting fics.

This is the most realistic response to that challenge yet (well, at least in my opinion).

Well done, very different approach. And so sad!
Good work!

I have read many stories that have been written through this lenglenge & this is the 1st like this I\'ve read!!! This may have been short, but it is STRONG & POWERFUL, filled with sadness & emotion!!! You did a FANTASTIC job at showing Severus\' anger & frustration & let him be the key to opening the eyes of others!!! AMAZING!!! Deb >^..^<

Angsty, darmatic, brilliant and perfect.

Absolutly amasing! Brilliant! I am a huge marriage fic-er and this is one of the best. It is new and refreshing to see the other side. Thank you.

That was heartwrenching, which I\'m sure you already know since you wrote it, but it was. I feel so sorry for poor Sev, anyotnyother human being for losing someone.

elementaldeity

Can I just knee at your feet and worship for a moment? I mean wow... That was powerful. Just... WOW. I am usually more articulate when I review but you have left me speachless. VERY good job. keep it up.

~iola_83