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October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! This was really well written, I loved it. Harry/Oliver is really growing on me...You should write another chapter, this was so good! Anyways, great job, Toodlez!
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September 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very nice voyeuristic fic! I loved that Harry never knew Oliver was standing there; makes the fantasy complete for Oliver. Nice that Harry didn\'t call out a name either - that tends to get a bit cliched.
Good job, very enjoyable one-shot.
Good job, very enjoyable one-shot.
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July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
MORE.....just MORE!!!!
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July 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was hot!!!! Very nice!!!!!
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May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was lovely. I have a masterbation fetish (or so I\'ve learned) and this was amazing. Very well written, which is hard to find on here. Good grammer, structure and wording. I thoroughlyoyedoyed it. :-D Bravo!
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May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE MORE PLEASE.No one ever does a good Oliver wood story and he\'s one of the sexiest characters.A+++++ keep up the good work I hope there will be more.
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May 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey :O) this was getting good.Are there going to be more chapters.Awesome.I can\'t wait pleast post more soon.
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April 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very hot and oh so yummy! I LOVE that it\'s short and sweet... p-l-e-a-s-e don\'t turn this into a multi-chapter ficlet; it\'s *perfect* the way it is, honest!!!
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February 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice story are goi going to write another chapter?
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December 22, 2002 at 12:00 AM
I felt so delightfully voyeuristic while reading this. It was perfectly written and masterfully done, though I couldn't help but wish there was a sequel *hint*
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