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May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like your story and should like to read more of it. It is obvious that you put a lot of effort into it before posting. You have a few grammarors,ors, most of which I have forgotten. You do have one consistant one. You are misspelling the word through as trough. keep going and I will review you again later.