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schedule
October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww that\'s so good, but so sad! *sob*
schedule
May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am a beta-reader, so what I do is search for errors. First and foremost, you need a little more description of Harry, more depth. Other then that, this story is excellent! Amazing! I give it my highest rating!