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June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice
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June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I enjoy your writing style. This is a very good story.
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June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Incredibly good. Very well and thoroughy written. Funny and sad...nice
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June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is turning into a realy interesting story. Alot of neat ideas and great detailed descriptions in the last story. Good joo. More please...
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June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good.
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June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was absolutely beautiful. I\'m awed. I\'ve got to say this has to be one of the best examples of writing I\'ve seen here. The characters are well developed, and the story is really starting to fill in. This third chaper though was stunning. The imagery was incredible and you\'ve taken the story on to a whole new level, what interesting and creative ideas you have here. very impressive and you can bet I\'ll be back for more...Ye Gods...
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June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bravo. Once again I\'m astounded by your use of imagery. It was like I was there, feeling and smelling and taking in the sounds. Interesting turn of events, how do you think of these things? I\'m glad you do though becaus I get to read them. I think that Morgan is starting to soften up a bit toward Severus hmmm?
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June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was very well done. I love your style of writing here. It\'s so eloquent. It\'s sad but intriguing at the same time. I\'m thinking they might grow on heach other hm...This has the makings of a very good story..
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June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good start, can\'t wait to read more on it!! She interests me. But then, any woman who can put snape on his toes is a good one.