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Hi there, nice fic, i never read one that was like this, with Lily, shes always the sweet innocnet Gryffindor in love with James.... he he he, i liked this

Jane

I was really surprised by the quality of this fic, compared to some others on this site... that was very well done. The entire time the identities were perfectly written. I do believe this is the first fic I've read with this couple that I've actually found even remotely believable. I found some parts -- personal opinion -- a tad melodramatic, but other than that, this is very well done. The paragraph mess-ups were a little distracting, but not anything enough to take away from the fic. Very well done, I give it an A-