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for The Wage of Sin

by Catsqueen

person Anon
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Mars
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOTTEST.FIC.EVER.period.
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person Heather
schedule July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really enjoyed the story. HG\'s POV was very funny, sort of Bridget Jones-ish in a way but I really liked the story.
person spaz141
schedule June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You crack me up. Thanks.
person Beltane
schedule June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely brant,ant, have no complaints aside from you dont update nearly quickly enough, and its Virgina Weasley. I dont know why that irritates me'm p'm probably a freak. Otherwise though, adored this story
person spaz141
schedule June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
twas was fortunate, H\'s POV is funny. Thanks.
person Snapeaholic
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice Th The first chapter was a bit confusing in exactly how she managed to get from storeroom to bath, but after a couple of reads, finally figured it out. Keep up the good work! Is there more to follow?
person Andrea
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hiya there Catsqueen!

You definately don\'t need reviews with the quality of your writing! Wow. I couldn\'t believe hen hen I was reading your piece. It\'s an absolute jewel of a piece of writing. Please do keep this up! I was in stitches during and after the story...my neighbors thought a hyena had moved into the neighborhood.

Please don\'t take this too seriously, but I just thought that you might like to take this into consideration. I\'m 100% lurker, so I have read lots and lots of stories...you might say I\'m blto ato a certain extent, but the reading experience is greatly impacted by grammar and flow of the story. You have both pat. The only thing that I had a bit of difficulty following Hermione\'s journey from Snape\'s storeroom into his bathroom...It took me a few re-reads to get the picture.

Anyway. Keep up the good work. I am eagerly looking forward to reading what happens next!

Andrea

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