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for Humility and Obedience

by Byline

person stella
schedule August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it's not often I review- but damn! It's not all that often either that a story gts me this worked up:) please update soon!!!!!
person Anon
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay I am on the edge of my seat waiting for more.... very good I like it.
person RedPat
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Since you insisted...

Nicely done!! Sounds like poor Hermione will end up more frustrated than she started out, or perhaps not - Snape sounds like he's got some fairly complicated plans for our poor over-achieving Gryff. Can't wait to see what happens next.
person atropos4
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was absolutely amazing! I'd love to read more of it. The visualization was wonderfully done.
person Persia
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Persia hands the author some nice sinful chocolate chip cookies to go along with her delicious lemonade! Kinda sad for Hermy that she doesn't get any love meat, but I guess the stuff Sev has in mind will more than likely make up for it. Thanks for the email notice about the update, it's kind of hard to keep up with all my favorite fics, even if they're on my bookmarks. I really enjoyed the chapter, and I'm glad there's more wicked goodness on the way!
person Jules
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More!!! More!!! More!!!! And thank you killing Ron early.
person Megan
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHHH! Keep writing pleeeeeaase!! This is so much fun!!
person laceyweasley
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Come on. I want to know. Please update! Thanks
person Anon
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like your vision of Snape. Fluffy just doesn't suit him. Thanks for the great read, look forward to more of it.
person Ariana
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
mmm you wouldn't think you'd end it that way. I would have thought he wanted her in his house, in his bed, under his watch. I don't know. I love the bondadge and lemonade. very good work, keep it up!

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