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August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
If it pleases you, Mistress- may we have more?
Please?
Pretty please?
I'm begging you.....
As you wish,
Your obediant servant
red
Please?
Pretty please?
I'm begging you.....
As you wish,
Your obediant servant
red
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August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for letting me know that you had updated. I enjoyed the chapter and like Hermione, I am eagerly waiting for more. Pleas e update soon. Thanks.
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August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIT!
I haven't read better in prsionsional publication!
I sincerely hope that you're going to write more. :D Please?
I'll beta. I'll help.
I haven't read better in prsionsional publication!
I sincerely hope that you're going to write more. :D Please?
I'll beta. I'll help.
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August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I'm quivering with anticipation. Please, Please, Please update soon...
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August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*shudder* damn is it hot in here or is it me...
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August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this.. can't wait to read more
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August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
UGGGGGH! I have been waiting half of forever for another chapter. Please don't keep me in suspense too long for the rest. I ththisthis story really does have potential.
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August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfully written and very insightful to the mind of Severus ... I love the fact that he's not honey and roses and is, instead, canon to His character ... the sadistic Potions Master ... who would have thought I could be jealous of a character in a fic?
Keep writing ... it's got me waiting, none too patiently, for the next update
da girlie
Keep writing ... it's got me waiting, none too patiently, for the next update
da girlie
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August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don't think of Snape as you have him here as bad. Just Masterful with a great big capital M! LOL. You're playing them perfectly. One thing though, just because Hermione is the bottom doesn't mean that she's weak. So you might want to watch that for the future chapters so you don't end up making her out to be a whimp. Keep up the good writing!
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August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like your story a lot and I'm glad you updated. Just one thing in your 2nd chapter left me a bit puzzled: how did Snape manage to keep this conversation with Hermione and even force her to kiss him in such a crowded room? Don't hope this sound like nitpicking, it's just that I do enjoy a story even more when small details work for me as well. Hope you'll update soon since developments really become interesting..