rate_review Reviews

i really like this story you should continue it instead of having it be a oneshot. :)

This is the most fun Ive had while reading a non-canon storyline. Good stuff :)

I loved your story. It was great! The only thing I disagree is the things about the baby. Come on, none of them can have a child, they're both boys! Anyway, this was a wonderful story!

You should write a sequel where Draco and Harry get married and we find out who is carrying the baby.

GREAT story! I loved all your characters. Write a sequel!!!
kisses,
mirage

ow god! won\'t there be a sequal? i\'d love to read the sequal

This story was a bit clumsy and the characters seemed to change suddenly - it was slightly inconsistent. It got good towards the middle but then it changed again.

I do not dominate the English, like that language that I wait for this review be achieved to deal.

I read what they published and raelmente I like much what I understood ... I know that it is difficult, but it might be possible that they were continuing it?

And certainly that I am charmed with Draco\'s idea, it of the family and two children, it seems to me to be perfect like that, a child and a girl...

In spanish:

No domino el idioma ingles, asi que espero este review se logre entender.

Lei lo que publicaron y raelm me me gusto mucho lo que entendi... s