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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Has promise, but please upload it again - it's full of glitches that make it very hard to read! Examples: Three hours ago the whole Order of the Phoenix, s Hes Hermione, had gone to defend Hogwarts. [later on] She thanked the Godat iat it was the Christmas Holidays so no students were in any danger. -- It's full of glitches like these.
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June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow that's good i like it. Keep it up.
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August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
is there more?!!please
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June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I\'ll read more if you post more. thanks.
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June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this chapter very much. I like how you made the beginning very serious and ended on a funny note. I hope that you continue with the story until the end of it.