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person Anon
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG.

1) since when did Snape ever giggle? you wrote \"and he started giggling.\" In all of the 5 books Ive never read a part in which Snaped laughed or showed any signs of humour. The only time he even smiled was when he was giving a cruel smile.

2) you\'re OC\'s are acting very childish. Even the student shave a bit more decorum.
person Bambi
schedule July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Im liking this story, keep up the good work :)
person Stupid
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is really dumb! I can\'t believe some one would write shit like this no wonder no reviews it I could harly get past the first chapter. all i have to say is go home
person alexiaglory
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey babe i love this story don\'t stop!!! LOve ya lots of hugs and i promise i\'ll work on my story soon!!

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