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for The Tenth Rule

by Morier

person Malice
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH COME ON! Hurry up! Yer being as nasty as Snape keeping us waiting for more!

:)

Awsome. Thanks!
person T
schedule August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I feel like the girls, anticipating Snape's next move. Can't wait for the next chapter, are you going to post it anywhere else with all aff problems?
person T
schedule August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
One word summaries your story and characters: Wow or Hot! :) I checked back a few times as this was offline again as I missed the last chapter, but it was worth the wait. Its such good writing, plot and appropriate tension, can't wait for the next no doubt incredible chapter!!
person penmouse756@yahoo.com
schedule August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am surprised that you have only 2 reviews so far. I enjoyed this chapter - it was, er, stimulating. Your Snape is deliciously dark and oh so hot! Looking forward to more.
person Panda-Monium
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YOU HAVE TO WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!! Come on... you can\'t leave it like that!

Okay, noww for some actual comments : Love your writting, it believible and interesting, although my view of Snape is a little different from your depiction. You OC\'s are fantastic, some of the best characters I have ever read, totally real and the have FAULTS!!! It horrible how many perfect people their are walking around fanfiction. Their likable and interesting.

I want to see what happens next so bad!!!! WRITE!!!! PLEASE!!
person Sevfan
schedule June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What an absolutely delicious story! It is extremely well written and the two girls seem to be real. Your description of Snape is perfect. You have captured him to a tee! I can\'t wait for more. Please update soon.

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