rate_review Reviews

Umm... Well, if you\'d put alittle more effort into your Authors notes as you do into your actuall story (Which seemed to be lacking a !pizzaz! consept) You\'d be fine... but...believe it or not, people have begun to type like they talk... and I\'m pretty sure when you say \"like\" you say with an I, not a y, and no e... not to mention all the other crappy shorthand that totally turned me off the story because of that disgusting little Authors Note filled with digusting little shorthands...

~Samma

Just an FYI, your story format is messed up, there are question marks instead of apostrophes. It\'s a good start to a story though.

that is mean of Draco