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schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
so at first I thought, \"there could be a little bit more action\" after I read the first two chapters and then third one was perfect; I felt sorry for malfoy when Snape seem so emotionless about the whole incident. but the last chapter thing was perfect. Keep up the bloody brilliant work!!!!

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