rate_review Reviews

I like the story Harry needs to control his life not let it control him.Is this gonna be a top or bottom Harry story(I\'m just curious)

love it please update!!

LOVE the book names, and the authors. Especially Snape, Slytherin, and Dumbledor. Will you be updating soon? I can\'t wait!!

So far I like what I see. I hope that you update soon. I hate it when the updates are slow because I forget the story and end up never finishing it.

The story is great so far. The story plot is a golden oldie dhundhundreds of times before, but frankly that dosen\'t matter it\'s the little things that you add into your story that count, that make the story unique. You\'ve gotten a great start on your story but I wish the chapters were longer. A lot longer. It will moke your story better. I do like the book names the extra time you spent on the titles was in my opinion well worth it. I hope that you are Snape sympathetic because he is my all time favorite character. Please update soon.

I like your writing style so far. The begining is interesting, and I can\'t wait for more!

You have a great start here. I just wish the chapters were longer. Another thing is that your sentences all have a very basic structure. This and this this. Then this and this this. Try varying them a little bit. The story plot you have has been done before, but it looks like you\'ll take a new perspective and this will be a great read!

I like it! The book names are very good, and some of the authors sounded kind of funny. Update soon!
~Ducky~

i really want to see how this turns out! please continue!