schedule
February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is a beautiful piece of work! Very well written. You really should write more! I just about freaked when I found out it was TBC. LoL.
Good luck with it!
Oh! And good taste in music for the begining of chapters! ^_^
Good luck with it!
Oh! And good taste in music for the begining of chapters! ^_^
schedule
July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It bothered me a lot that you didn\'t get any reviews.
This is a very well-written fic. Your grammar os good, spelling is good...
I really really enjoyed it.
It also shocked me how accurately you described the \'black-out sensation\' you experience when you starve yourself.
Being someone who has experienced such a thing, I am offended by most stories depicting eating disorders but yours captured it very well.
As sadistic as this may sound I am also enjoying Draco\'s pain. He just hurts so beautifully here.
Thank you for sharing your story. <3
On a side note, I like your selection in music.
Update soon!
This is a very well-written fic. Your grammar os good, spelling is good...
I really really enjoyed it.
It also shocked me how accurately you described the \'black-out sensation\' you experience when you starve yourself.
Being someone who has experienced such a thing, I am offended by most stories depicting eating disorders but yours captured it very well.
As sadistic as this may sound I am also enjoying Draco\'s pain. He just hurts so beautifully here.
Thank you for sharing your story. <3
On a side note, I like your selection in music.
Update soon!
schedule
July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You have quite a number of typographical errors.
You repeatedly wrote \'blonde\' as \'blood\' as well as a few other mistakes as well.
Also, the accents could use a little bit of work.
Otehr than that, it\'s all good.
good luck with the next chapters
You repeatedly wrote \'blonde\' as \'blood\' as well as a few other mistakes as well.
Also, the accents could use a little bit of work.
Otehr than that, it\'s all good.
good luck with the next chapters