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for Blood of the Virgin Witch

by selened

person ancientgirl
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAHHHHHH!!!! I wanted to bitch slap Harry. Take the potion!!!!! Please please please you have to update quickly. You left it at the most evil cliffhanger!
person jonelin
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a very clever story! more more more! :)
person alicat999
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sighs* geez Harry can be difficult sometimes lol.

I was so happy to see you updated, I had been checking back to see if you had done so.

Was a little disapointed that there wasn\'t any full blown smut lol but who isn\'t?

But I managed to console myself with the fact that there will be alot more time for that in the next chappie.

Thanks for updating and not abandoning this fic, you\'re doin a great job and I can\'t wait for more.

xoxox
person Susan
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I too was concerned over Snape\'s choice of vocabulary in the last bit, but somehow, you made it seem fitting. Thank you for the quick updates and for what I think is an interesting take on the \"virgin blood\" plotline. Not implying that it has been over done...just that this is so interesting. I would lto sto see why Hermione seems so calm about this. Just keep writing. Thanks again!!
person Susan
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh...sorry to be a pain but had a quick question. Why didn\'t they offer Hermione the potion she helped to make? I know that it is not that important, I am just a curious reader. LOL. Thanks again and so sorry for the lame-o PS.
person spaz141
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy Crap! I appreciated Harry\'s concern for Hermione came across as real to me. The build up is killing me, can\'t wait for the next chapter. Thanks for updating.
schedule July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am glad you have updated and realitively quickly too,
which I find a major plus as it irks me when good fic\'s get abandoned.

I think I would back away slowly too if Sev started giggling at me lol.

I loved these lines: \"We have found ourselves in this position because,
you have invited me to debauch you this evening.\" It\'s so Sev god love him lol.

And: \"It probably appealed to Gryffindors sense of the dramatic.\"
They do have a tendency to possess a dramatic characterristic lol.

I can\'t wait to read the next chappie I am looking forward to spotting and update soon.
Keep up the good work xoxox
person StarGlade
schedule July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, well, I really love this. It has so much background story in it, that it seems just like some kind of strange... romance novel! Bet never-the-less, it is with out doubt, written wounderfully! I eagerly await the chance to read more when you update it it!

I am very pelase that this has story and a plot in it, also very effective, but the personal story really gives it an upclose feel to the story, instead of just a pointless, porely written smut story :D
person spaz141
schedule July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey plot is your style and it works. The whole spin on brewing the potion of Harry was a brilliant idea. The last Hogwarts virgin was a little hard to believe, but it is necessary for the story. I look forward to the next chapter. Thanks.
person spaz141
schedule July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a delma, a twin sandwich would have been interesting. Hmmm, looking forward to chapter two. Thanks.

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