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great start.... please continue cant wait to see more

Ooh, loving this already. The stories premise is great and I can\'t wait to read what happens when Hermione and Harry have to share living quarters. Poor Ron. Anyway, great story.

Hey, great beginning. I love fics where Hermione is with someone else and then Harry steals her away. Think after this one you could write a story with Hermione as a school slut? :) Hope so. At any rate, continue soon. :)

Oooooo
Du Du Dun
can\'t wait until the next chapter
kudos to you

Okay, it\'s a start. The paragraphs were competently written and the story set up. I\'d like to see an expanded sex scene and perhaps a better premise. To simply say that the head boy and head girl share a bed as part of their duties is a little trite. Why is this so? What\'s the reason behind such a tradition, if it necessarily exists.

Hey Nice Story!Hey maybe you should do a lil threesome eh?lol