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schedule November 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey there , I really like your plot and all but I believe you're extremely rushing things in this story a little more thoughts and a bit more descriptive writing would do wonders for it really. But like I said all in all it's a good plot just needs to be taped up here and there a bit.

MD
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is interesting. i hope you will update the story sometime soon. i would like to know what happens next.
person Serenity1
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
waaahhhh! when r u going 2 update again? it's been wat, 2 years now? almost 3 to be exact!!! when!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person MH
schedule June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhh LOVED it, please continue!
person Missi
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just found your fic today, and I can\'t wait for more!! Will y\'all be updating soon?
person yana ^_^
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think it\'s very nice so far.
but I don\'t think leaving Harry with Hagrid is sutch a good idee.
But I\'d like to see how this story will develop.
please update soon

~greetz
person Fallen Angel Lucifer
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just read your story and I think it was pretty interesting. Though the part about Hedwig made me feel really sick. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future and good job so far. Update?
person Anon
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey update and please email me when you do.
person Ru-Shin
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really good so far. I hope you two continue with it. Update soon please! ^^
person rikkairora
schedule December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Great story so far, but i almost stopped reading it after I found out what happened to Hedwig...... Looking forward to what\'s to come, keep up the great work, but just one request. No more surprise dinners, okay?

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