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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniffs* Poor Harry!!! The guy is an emotional wreck. @_@ Same for poor Snape. They always seem to say the wrong things to each other at just the wrong times. *sighs* Will they ever learn?
I think falling down the stairs was a nice dramatic touch....a very cruel dramatic touch but hey that is how life is. Please update soon. ^_^
I think falling down the stairs was a nice dramatic touch....a very cruel dramatic touch but hey that is how life is. Please update soon. ^_^
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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was enjoying the fic until you had Harry tumble down a flight of stairs. This cliche has been used SO many times in fiction and television that it\'s ridiculous! I don\'t think I can keep reading your fic. I apologize, but that cliche bothers me so much that I can\'t continue.
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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ARRRRGGGGGGHHHHH!!!!!!!! Nooooooooooooooo!
HOW COULD YOU!!!???? That was no \'cliffie\' but a dangerous precipice, a chasm without end, a black hole - You mean awful person!
I need hope for Harry and Severus, please tell me you\'ll let them have some hope for Ebony. You\'ve wrenched my heart from me. Being a parent, you really know how to be cruel. This was really wicked.
The story should continue with Harry, of course, back in the hospital wing, or yet, in St. Mungo\'s undergoing emergency childbirth. At eight months the child is viable and able to live on her own, especially with all that magical strength behind her.
Either Severus or Harry, probably Severus, will slip up and mention something that makes Harry think that maybe love can be between them. It all leads to a mushy ending of passionate sex, but I\'m not sure you and the rest of the readers want something so simple. (Who am I kidding??) Hmmmm, some further complications to the story is maybe Harry and Severus get back at Dumbledore, Hermione and Ron somehow. Just some thoughts to make you post faster. Oh, and I grace your muse and spirit with much chocolate frogs, gentle stroking and kind words to help you post faster.
PLEASE??!!!
HOW COULD YOU!!!???? That was no \'cliffie\' but a dangerous precipice, a chasm without end, a black hole - You mean awful person!
I need hope for Harry and Severus, please tell me you\'ll let them have some hope for Ebony. You\'ve wrenched my heart from me. Being a parent, you really know how to be cruel. This was really wicked.
The story should continue with Harry, of course, back in the hospital wing, or yet, in St. Mungo\'s undergoing emergency childbirth. At eight months the child is viable and able to live on her own, especially with all that magical strength behind her.
Either Severus or Harry, probably Severus, will slip up and mention something that makes Harry think that maybe love can be between them. It all leads to a mushy ending of passionate sex, but I\'m not sure you and the rest of the readers want something so simple. (Who am I kidding??) Hmmmm, some further complications to the story is maybe Harry and Severus get back at Dumbledore, Hermione and Ron somehow. Just some thoughts to make you post faster. Oh, and I grace your muse and spirit with much chocolate frogs, gentle stroking and kind words to help you post faster.
PLEASE??!!!
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March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh MY GOD! You\'re EVIL! You have to update fast! I have to know what happens!
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March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You can\'t end it there, that is evil, evil I tell you eeevviiiiil. Amazing chapter, I just want to whap albus upside the head and then force truth serium down Harry and Sev\'s throughts and ask them if they love eachother
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March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want to hit everyone in this story except Minerva, Poppy and Ebony. I can\'t wait until you update. I want to know what happens. Great Story line and it works so well, everything fits in perfectly with its own little excuse. Good Job, but please hurry with the updates.
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March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOoooooooooooooooooooooo!!!! You can\'t leave it like that! We need to know what happens!
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March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i just cried a bit for harry and sev,,,please continue sooooon!!!!
this story is real good!
this story is real good!
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March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY you finally updated!!! I remember reading this story from a long time ago. I had almost forgotten about it. ^_^!
I really like your story. This is one of the few fics I have read when they have a baby and I think that is so cute, especially a girl. =^_^= I have read some before but they never went through the pregnancy I don\'t think. I can\'t wait to see them as parents.
I love all the angst and drama you have added. Fate seriously does not seem to be on their side. First with them having sex and Harry not knowing it was Snape and Snape thinking he meant nothing to Harry. I loved the scene when Snape figured out he was going to be a father. =^_^= Finally they find out the truth only to have Harry go into protective mode and push Snape away. Now they are trapped thinking the other does not return their feelings. OH THE PAIN OF IT ALL!!!! It is like yes he is going to tell him finally....then...NOOOOOO....waaaahh!!! @_@! Well I hope this does not go on forever but most likely if they get through this some other problem will arise.
Keep writing your story is great!!!! =^_^= Update soon!!!
I really like your story. This is one of the few fics I have read when they have a baby and I think that is so cute, especially a girl. =^_^= I have read some before but they never went through the pregnancy I don\'t think. I can\'t wait to see them as parents.
I love all the angst and drama you have added. Fate seriously does not seem to be on their side. First with them having sex and Harry not knowing it was Snape and Snape thinking he meant nothing to Harry. I loved the scene when Snape figured out he was going to be a father. =^_^= Finally they find out the truth only to have Harry go into protective mode and push Snape away. Now they are trapped thinking the other does not return their feelings. OH THE PAIN OF IT ALL!!!! It is like yes he is going to tell him finally....then...NOOOOOO....waaaahh!!! @_@! Well I hope this does not go on forever but most likely if they get through this some other problem will arise.
Keep writing your story is great!!!! =^_^= Update soon!!!
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March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Darkmoore,
Great story! It\'s getting really good now that each of the characters are at a critical point. Major changes to come! (Oh, goody) ~Grins~ You\'ve already let the cat out of the bag and told us it\'ll be a happy ending, but what happens inbetween?????Is Ebony\'s life endangered again? Does Harry ever realise his love for Severus? Will Severus voice his love for Harry???? Ooooo, update soon. 2005/03/05
Great story! It\'s getting really good now that each of the characters are at a critical point. Major changes to come! (Oh, goody) ~Grins~ You\'ve already let the cat out of the bag and told us it\'ll be a happy ending, but what happens inbetween?????Is Ebony\'s life endangered again? Does Harry ever realise his love for Severus? Will Severus voice his love for Harry???? Ooooo, update soon. 2005/03/05