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October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is great. and it just got better the further i read. the start was more smut than i like but as the plot developed further it just got so good. i love the idea that severus has this hidden familyand draco is a horny little bastard. its just sop entertaining. and you brought in one of my favorite characters, hermione. i want to see her relationship with brandon further develop. this is so good. i look forward to more when you have the chance to write again. so entertaining!
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September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well writers block is good for you -- that was a great chapter! Draco's confliction is very believable
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September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'll tell you again. This story is awesome. Please update--Pretty pretty please, and please put Snapes son and Hermione together.
Thanks again
Thanks again
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September 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh please let Donolov go to Hogwarts. Please Please put him and Hermione together. Let her be the one to TAME him. I'd even like to see Bethany...the poor precious child get Harry Potter.
That would make your bad ass SNAPE Sr. have a permanent pain in his Head and somewhere else also.
Great Story.
That would make your bad ass SNAPE Sr. have a permanent pain in his Head and somewhere else also.
Great Story.
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September 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You're awesome and I love this story. Please Please continue.
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September 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story -- I love it! Keep it comin'
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August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story would suck the balls off a llama, honestly.
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July 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey I like it! Very entertaining. I don\'t usually come across a story about the Malfoys and the marriage thing that I like, but this one is good. I didn\'t notice any problems at all. Good work, and please up as as soon as you can!
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July 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! Lots of interesting twists that make your story stand out. That spell of Draco\'s does have me worried ;) Great job!
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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awsome keep going likr you are its awsome