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August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice start. I hope you like playing with fire. Snape will be hard to control now, have fun. Lord knows I am since I reviewed your story. Please join my yahoo group (http://groups.yahoo.com/group/severussnapesgirl) and review my fanfic Hogwarts and Music.
Ash
Ash
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August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, but it really doesn\'t have much action yet. I enjoy the fights between Professor Infinity and Snape. Quite entertaining, but a bit imature. But keep up the good work. It\'s pretty interesting so far.
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August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oi, this is pretty interesting. But I hope this character of yours ain\'t gonna turn out to be just another Mary Sue. She kinda seems like one so far. But I like how the story is developin, good on ya.
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August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This isn\'t half bad. But I got two words for Professor Infinity: Mary Sue. I hope you fix that. Tee hee hee! Lupin is back! I hope you\'re gonna put some Sirpin (Sirius/Lupin) in here. Yummy. I like the sound of this Twilight Viper. Sounds hot. Update soon.