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for First Time

by DutchGirl

person Apollonia
schedule August 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was quick and dark. ;) *Two thumbs up*
person Gina
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think you did an excellent job. Keep writing things like this!! I love this kind of stories... so tender :D And Lucius is sooo handsome! -Gina-
person Sophie
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to tell to tha AWFUL reviewer, writerlimn, that if she has some courage, she would sign with her own nick, but she hasn't. That WAS a flame. I came here to tell Dutch Wench that she did a WONDERFUL job: this is maybe one of the finest short fics I've ever read. Don't care if some people don't appreciate it: just know that you did a perfect job. I'm really looking forward to your next works! Keep writing and don't pay ANY attention to the FOOLISH people!! You're great.
person **RiNoA**
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAY!!!! Finally a good fic in this site!! I've been looking for one for days, I've finally found one in the end. The moment is described wonderfully, with sweetness and tenderness... it's a lovely piece. I hope you'll write again things like this. A little beauty really!
person Keddo
schedule August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sweet and wonderful!!! Keep writing, DW!!!

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