rate_review Reviews

YEAH on the A in Forensics! I\'m a toxicologist. The amount of info floating around in your head at the moment, I bet you\'d kill for a pensive!

Farout it has been a while since you\'ve updated but im so frickin\' glad you did!!! I love this story and i love the way you write iti really dont think anything could be changed... so realy i just wanted to let you know that people do read your story and please please PLEASE keep it comming!

Cheers,
Satanicmidget

P.S. congrats on the exam. I\'m a university student from Australia so i know how hard it is to try and study and pass and have some time out for yourself.

This really is a good story. I like the direction that it seems to be going. I personally can\'t wait till Snape see\'s Draco, or the other way around.

B

I love this story so much! I hope snape will show hermione his feelings.Update soon!

Why haven\'t you updated this?! I can\'t believe you\'ve stopped, It was so good!

Please update this! It is so good! You shouldn\'t let it just die off!

please for the love of god update!!!!! it will kill me if i dont know what happens!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great job. I liked your Snape.

cdk

PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE THIS SOON! I AM GOING TO DIE IF YOU DON\'T!

It\'s a lovely, charming, sweet story, and I like it very much. I am looking forward to seeing what happens. The plot idea is an interesting twist on the Hr/S \'ship. I have only one real criticism, which I hope is constructive. Your story reads like a children\'s book, and the masturbation scene seems as if it was inserted to meet the ratings expectations. I understand the purpose of it, of course: to give Snape a heads-up (in more ways than one), but stylistically it doesn\'t fit together. I enjoy the simplistic style of your prose so much, I hate to suggest adopting a more sophisticated voice just to fit in with the erotic expectations of the website, although that would make the story as a whole hang together better.

Please please please do not stop writing this story. It has a great deal of promise, and so does your writing.