rate_review Reviews

Hello, I read these just because you had no review and I thought I would get you started. There is some real potential in you, I think. Each set of poems has a different feel to it, for each person, and I am impressed by that. I liked the first Snape poem, and oddly enough, the Quidditch poem just because the tone and pace were such a nice break from the previous four. Lovely images in the Lily poem. They weren't quite deep enough for my taste, but I have to say, VER VERY VERY picky. By deep I mean revealing something about the character that I can see in myself. Either that or metaphors so striking that they stay with you. (The honey and obisidan, etc section was very nice, though.)

Marianne (odddoll, severuscarus)