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January 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I wish this was going to be updated. Its REALLY good ya know
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September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, that was pretty hott! i mean, ya, the plot was a bit thin, but its a porno, arent they all? lol, great stuff
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good, but it was just a one-off thing afterall? Too bad! what about the other scenes?
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April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is really funny. i think that you should contiune this if at all possible.
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August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, and the idea behind it was pretty unique. Loved it
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August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thought that this was fairly funny, really ooc. Turning a pwp into a porn movie was a really interesting idea. Perhaps the only thing i can think to suggest is to tell people why hermione needed the mone her her drive to a porn even though she hate malfoy.
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August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is fairly good...with potential to be better....keep the laughs coming, this could be hysterical, the kind of fic we clandestinely sneak into work to snicker about with our co-workers and then get in trouble for.
-jo
-jo
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August 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sucked no iwouldn't say that . i found it both amusing and arousing you should continue !
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August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
suck ass isn't the word for your story. i thought it was preety good, concidering you were trying to write a porn, while trying to write it with harry potter characters, thats not easy, i've tried it, i have no imagination for just sex, if thats what you were going for. keep writing, if not on this story,maybe another one. :)