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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beau. Il n\'y a aucun autre mot que cela. = Beautiful. There is no other word than that.
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September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! you just described all the emotions that I was going through when I realised that I was obssesed with my at-the-time-future-girlfriend. Except for the whole ten years waiting to tell her thing. I waited one month. I was tormented by these emotions, then again so would any one that has to go through it.
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September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww...That was so cute. Are you planning to write more? It is good as it is but if you wanted you could always write more and tell what happens. I absolutely loved it! Keep up the good work!
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August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh smasing work babe, I enjoyed this!
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August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*gasps*
That was beautiful. Your descriptions of her torment and adoration were heart wrenching. I love the longing and hope you built up..and of course the unexpected ending.
Brilliant Moisie, it touched my heart. I
That was beautiful. Your descriptions of her torment and adoration were heart wrenching. I love the longing and hope you built up..and of course the unexpected ending.
Brilliant Moisie, it touched my heart. I
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August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bravo!
Beautiful!
Your prose is like poetry... The language is breathtaking, and your pacing perfection.
***s ovs over a pink rose*
Now, take a bow girl... You deserve it!
--- Bibi
Beautiful!
Your prose is like poetry... The language is breathtaking, and your pacing perfection.
***s ovs over a pink rose*
Now, take a bow girl... You deserve it!
--- Bibi