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person Francy
schedule September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, you have done it again - that was brilliant... Lilly is such a good character. And she will be perfect in Slytherin if thats where you put her... I loved the encounters with Draco & Lucius!! You kept them perfectly in character...

Well done Dagny - keep it coming!! I agree that the chapters are on the short side - but then I suppose we would have to wait longer for you to write longer chapters...

And you bought Lucius in earlier for little ol' me?? Thats so sweet!! I just have to ask you for one thing (I'll trade the cookie for it!!), please don't let Lucius get soppy - remember, you promised a DARK LM pairing - and they are ALWAYS the best!! Hmmm, Lucius - yes, I know, I am obsessed!!! LOL

:-)

I can't wait to see what Lilly's relationship is going to be with like with Snape, too...

Bravo!!

person alecto
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lucius! great job. this is a very well written story. the chapters are just so darn short! i am very much looking forward to seeing how she interacts with draco and lucius.
person No Name
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is great! Seeing the conversation between Draco and Harry was really interesting. I really like Lilly's character. I can tell a lot is going on and I look forward to see where your story goes and what you do with the characters. So far I have really enjoyed your portrayal of the cannon characters greatly. Good luck with the writing process!
person Joanna Scarlett
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am very much enjoying the story so far. Very well written, looking forward to more. Sorry I haven't reviewed before. :-)
person Francy
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi Dagny!!

It keeps getting better!! As for the Malfoy action "yeah baby - bring it on"!! Just one bit of advice - the steamier the better!! ;-)

Seriously though, you are really good at setting the story up... The way you wrote Snape into it, and poor Lily - not knowing if her Mum's still alive... This story is already full of imagination, magic and mystery - can't wait to read whats to come.

I see you've gotten lots of hits for this story but not many reviews - are people just waiting for the steamy sex maybe?? :-)

Either way, I am sure they like it as much as I do - so don't get disheartened!! For what its worth, I promise to keep reading and reviewing.

Francy...
person Francy
schedule September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I will most definitely keep reading - I love how sassy Lilly is!!

And, oh my god, the end of this chapter gave me chills - great suspense!!

:-)
person Anon
schedule September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it seems to be good so far cant wait to see what happens next
person Francy
schedule September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very intriguing - looking forward to the next chapter.

Can't wait for the 'dark LM' pairing you promised in yoummaummary!!

:-)
person Francy
schedule September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooops, sorry, forgot to mention - I love your writing style!!

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