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for Twenty-Four Little Hours

by andihooper

person Sabrina
schedule September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great new chapter. Please update soon.
person ancientgirl
schedule September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating. Its true, in times of disctrss when we think something bad is going to happen, we can't helt tht thing of our mothers. I wonder what kind of a sign they will get to know who wins or not.
person AJ
schedule September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love how *tentative* this is; thickeickers of humour and despair.
person Persia
schedule September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! (Personally, I don't like to share my food with many people, but based on the situation and who it was she was doing the sharing thing with, I guess I can bear it without too much shuddering...desperate times call for desperate measures and all...I know, I'm a priss, I've just got this thing about other people's saliva on my food....)But anyway, good chapter none the less. I like that in your fic Hermione isn't a sex-pot bent on seduction for once. Everyone's always painting her this closet wanton, when I really think she's sort of in the middle. She knows what sexuality is but she's not panting for hot steamy monkey love. She's sort of naive sometimes...I think. Well, anyhow those are just my opinions...you're doing stupendous, keep it up!
person robin
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"He couldn't believe there was a female student who hadn't been groped by that horny little bastard..." <-------- this tis the best line ever!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"He couldn't believe there was a female student who hadn't been groped by that horny little bastard" this is the best line ever
person Sabrina
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great new chapter. Please update soon.
person ancientgirl
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, I'm dying to know what the heck is going on outside!!!!! I loved this chapter. I'm glad she knew just what she did to him by giving him that piece of candy. I'm keeping my fingers crossed that this will have a happy ending.
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love, love, LOVE this story! You've made a masterful blend of drama and humour. Dare I hope they will have to erm... sleep together? Purely for body warmth, of course! The bit with the candy was great. Please update again soon.
person pyewacket
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this. I check every day for updates. Please keep going--it's good.

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