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September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is quite a nice story arc you have... the built in time frame gives some hard parameters and the life-threatening external danger keeps the tension in their isolation. The veneer of day-to-day existence would be quite thin in these circumstances. I'm enjoying your direction here.
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September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
RAWR! Finish this.... PLEASE.
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September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yaaa! I like it when authors update often! I'm keeping my eye on this one, it's shaping up nicely! Thanks for the new fic, and for an idea I hadn't considered - their being stuck together in the cell, her in her nightie and him with the 'honesty' part of the spell? Whoo-hoo! You go, girl!
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September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Talk about sexual tension
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September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awwww! Such a sweet ending line to the chapter! Made me feel positively bubbly myself! I do have to say, the experience she had with him with her hair getting caught tickled my imagination a lot. I've had a few of kind of similar situations and I always find myself revisiting them to see if I can read more into them or just kind of think more deeply about what happend....sigh, if only they had been with Sev...to be in such close contact with him...I could take any snarls and snark anyday for that!
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September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. More please!!! LOL
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September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great new chapter. Please update soon.
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September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is progressing quite nicely. I'm wondering myself just what is going on out there? Jesus I'm hoping this doesn't wind up being some angsty story. I'll keep my fingers crossed for the good guys to win.
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September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
varry good pleas do continue with this
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lov the pee situation
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lov the pee situation
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September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting... Loved the humor of this chapter like when Hermione told the girls she'd rather sleep with Draco. Keep up the good work!