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person mariteri
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's going very well. Keep up the good work.
person ChevyBaby
schedule October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is excellent. I love how you've gone for the slow-progression of their relationship. In some stories it's just too rushed but in this, I think it's just right. And such a sweet scene to leave the story at :o) I hope there's more soon :o)
person kbluesmom
schedule October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great going!!! Keep it up.
person Jenn
schedule October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for the 5 new chapters!!! I really like where this story is going and I can't wait to read more!!!
person Ralina
schedule October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying your story and I am looking forward to more updates! Keep up the good work!
person apwbdsgirl
schedule October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love it. Keep writing. I check everyday for updates and am so pleased to find a few more chapters up! Can't wait for the next installment.
person Sophie
schedule October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!! Please finish writing the next chpater.
Thanx
person rinskigoddess
schedule October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you wanted ideas for a song? i like the song you raise me up by josh groban, it is a beautiful song, if you haven't heard it, you should listen to it, i think it would fit nicely snape's feelings towards hermione, and hermione's feelings about severus. i like your story alot, it is very interesting, and unique from most of the other ss/hg stories i have seen. kudos
person Persia
schedule September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(Big cheesy grin) Great chapter! I loved the bit about her imagining him sitting under a tree and reading all day! Aside from it being one of my favorite pastimes, it was a really cute mental picture to me. Also liked the bit where Dumbledore made Sev take the lemon drop. He sure gets things through to people without having to resort to actually getting shirty doesn't he?
person mariteri
schedule September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
First and foremost I feel the need to express that I have in deed been enjoying the story. It's well written and enjoyable. When I wrote my last review, I must tell you that what I was reading wasn't equalling the NC-17 that you had. Now that you've explained what was to come, I understand all the more what you, as the writter, are aimming for. No, I wasn't expecting shagging in the first few pages. Yes, I love it when the relationships are fostered and tended to well, allowing them to develop. Truth be told, I have a dirty mind and I was expecting more is all. But now that I know what you're up to, I get it. Thanks and keep up the good work.

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