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October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is pretty good so far. it's rare for me to find a H/D fic i like, but this one has potential. i really like how you ended chapter three. it was sweet, in an odd sort of way.
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October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! It's great! It just kill me when I think that Draco could die. Much sadness.:( Sadness. It's a great fic and I would love to see it updated soon.
Ice
Ice
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October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is great!! I love how it's not JUST smut...
*heh*
yeah, I DID enjoy that last chapter, though...
*more heh*
you're great at discriptions, keep it up!!
*awaits next chapter*
*heh*
yeah, I DID enjoy that last chapter, though...
*more heh*
you're great at discriptions, keep it up!!
*awaits next chapter*
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October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay! this story is wonderful
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October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I rea really liking the story until I came to this part:
Thinking about Draco being a man, instead a boy, did not help matters at all. Men were notorious for having more on their mind than kissing, when it came to actual relationships.
Why is Harry thinking of men as another gender? He's not a woman, he wouldn't be generalising about men - he is one! Anything that goes for Draco as a 'man' should go for Harry, too.
Thinking about Draco being a man, instead a boy, did not help matters at all. Men were notorious for having more on their mind than kissing, when it came to actual relationships.
Why is Harry thinking of men as another gender? He's not a woman, he wouldn't be generalising about men - he is one! Anything that goes for Draco as a 'man' should go for Harry, too.
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October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Harry watched Draco and Draco saw Harry. I bet Harry is so very embarrassed. Can't wait for chapter 4. This should be oh so good!
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October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Have Snape and Lucius fight! I love a good bad man rumble! They can fight and then... magic! Hah! Harry needs to get on with finding a cure for Draco. He needs to get better and they need to get together! Write write write!
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September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it's good, would like to see more, only.. i couldn't see harry calling malfoy draco aere ere in the conversation. only malfoy!! that's the only problem i see so far! hehe. x
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September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Je vous aime, mon coeur. Vous
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September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really good start, i hope you write more soon, I'm intrigued :)